Listen, I get it.
I’m sure it wasn’t easy convincing 75 CEOs to sign onto one carefully worded statement about the immigration enforcement disaster playing out in the Twin Cities and across Minnesota. Imagine the endless rewrites!
But I’m sorry. This doesn’t cut it. Almost 200 words that don’t say anything.
So, I took the liberty of making some edits and leaving a few comments in the attached. Please have a look and send back a revised version ASAP.
